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Chapter One

Chapter Two

Once upon a time, when I woke up in the morning I would immediately go to the shower, and after washing I’d get changed then I would eat my breakfast.

One day we were getting ready for our trip to the zoo, and the bus was waiting for us, after getting on I ran through the bus excitedly because it was the first time I went to the zoo. We arrived at the zoo and I asked my parents, ’’ This is the zoo?’’ they replied, “Yes, it is beautiful with many kinds of animals.’’

When we got inside, snakes were the first things I saw, they were yellow and the black snakes. The caretakers of the zoo asked, “Do you want to put the yellow snake around your neck?’’

“Maybe,” I said.

’’Oh my god!” I yelled as he placed the big snake on my shoulders.

My parents took some photos of me and my brothers, and they said that I was not scared, but, my brothers were and I was only five-years-old.

’’I was not scared? I was shaking and nervous,’’ I said.

The next animal I saw was a giant turtle and I rode on its shell but, I was not scared of it because I think they are good, my parents took more photos. The other animals were monkeys and they climbed a tree to eat bananas.

We had lunch at the zoo cottage and enjoyed the food, then it was time to go home and we rode on the bus. Once we got home we went to bed happily.

THE END

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I am a Filipina who lives in the Philippines with my mama, papa and brothers. My papa, who is Australian, has been teaching me to speak, read and write in English since I was little. I'm 11 years old now and have lots of stories to write on here so you can read them and help make my dream of publishing a book come true.
Scary Kids Stories, Chapter 3-My Trip To The Zoo
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4 thoughts on “Scary Kids Stories, Chapter 3-My Trip To The Zoo

  • March 27, 2020 at 9:53 am
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    Good day! Champers!

    Time to do a little reviewing.

    ran through the bus excitedly because it was the first time I went to the zoo.

    (Yes! The first time I went to the zoo, I was amazed, as a little kid. My eyes opened wide. The shutters stored the animals on my head. )

    Reading on… Ok.

    ran through the bus excitedly because it was the first time I went to the zoo.

    Hum…snakes are creepy in my opion. You were brave enough to have one lassoed around your neck. A constrictor can choke the daylights out of you!

    Reading along…where was this zoo? Champers.

    ***** Five Stars

    BOO 👻 Ghost

  • March 25, 2020 at 2:16 am
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    Hi Champers!

    What an exciting trip to the zoo you and your brothers had, and how very brave of you to let them put the snake around your neck. You should post one of the pictures they took.

    You are doing a great job of writing, Little Friend. Keep it up!

    Hugs,
    Rhonda

    • March 25, 2020 at 9:47 am
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      Thank you very much, and the pictures are on the broken cellphone sorry I can’t show you the pictures, if we can find it I will upload it.

  • March 24, 2020 at 10:12 am
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    Hi Champers

    A very good story and I’m happy you had fun at the zoo. I would be too afraid to have a snake on me or ride a giant turtle in case they bite me.

    Ambot

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